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Trace texture test 001

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I have had this texturefor a long time. I am just now finally getting to experiment with it.

Now if I can figure out how to make it glow.

Enjoy. Critiques welcome.
-DP
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I would like to start by saying that this is a very nice piece, the texture work and lighting are superb.

Your use of lighting really highlights her figure, but the shadows provide enough cover that it feels elegant instead of raunchy.

The hair has a slightly plastic look to it, which plays very well with the markings on the skin to tie together the cyberpunk feeling.

There are a few things that stand out as areas to improve.
You might try getting more light to her eyes to help them draw the viewer in. Right now, they get a little lost in the shadows on her face.

Also, it looks like her hands were posed to contact her body, but the shadows make it appear they they are hovering a few inches over her body. This gives her pose a slightly awkward feel that creates a dissonance with the confident expression you have given her.

Overall this is a very good piece, and with a few minor changes it could be excellent.